~||Sun River Pack||~ Part 1 (PLEASE JOIN! Pack mentioned in Off topic!)

(PInk.Pugal. NO Plots! Ask me. And your wolf is NOT magic, and can't "flash" around. There IS NOT any wolf packs around! >=c )

Shadow snarled at Ginger, "Whatever." She still lay stretched out on her tree branch.

Chiby Chu Vi wrote:

(PInk.Pugal. NO Plots! Ask me. And your wolf is NOT magic, and can't "flash" around. There IS NOT any wolf packs around! >=c )

((Sorry. I'll edit it.))

pinkpupgal98 wrote:

(( Sorry I mean Ginger! i accidently hit the o instead of i lol))
Avalik was glad Ginger was the alpha to control Avalik's arch-enemy.((XD)) Avalik knew she would have to deal with Shadow.
"Hey," she said when Xiau came up to her. Avalik smelt food. one moment she was there, the next she ran away and returned back where she had been sitting with a fat rabbit hanging from her mouth. "Whut Sume?" she said through her fresly caught rabbit., she meant 'want some' .
Avalik looked at Zephyr. "Want to sit over here and watch the fight?"

I WANT 2 FIGHT WITH SHADOW! well I'll have to wait. wonder if Zephyr and Xiau will be my friends....

"Hungry?" she used her muzzle and pushed the rabbit to Xiau.

Xiau looked at the rabbit. "No, thank you. You may have it, Avalik," Xiau said, staring at the ground with his ears against his head. He didn't want any attention.

Avalik: I nodded. and quietly ate.

(PinkPupgal, try alot harder on your grammer, I am pretty sure this is a semi-elite forum, not type as you will. It is to, not two, and 'I nodded and quietly ate.' Not 'I noded. and quietly eat.'. Also, spelling and puntuation as well as capitals matter. If you are going to type in third person, stay typing in third person, don't go "Avalik: I ran out of camp." and then go "Avalik stopped." You also need to make your posts longer. Down just write five words.

I am just saying, this is semi-elite.)

MistyRain-StabWithCookie wrote:

(PinkPupgal, try alot harder on your grammer, I am pretty sure this is a semi-elite forum, not type as you will. It is to, not two, and 'I nodded and quietly ate.' Not 'I noded. and quietly eat.'. Also, spelling and puntuation as well as capitals matter. If you are going to type in third person, stay typing in third person, don't go "Avalik: I ran out of camp." and then go "Avalik stopped." You also need to make your posts longer. Down just write five words.

I am just saying, this is semi-elite.)

((sorry, I'll make corrections before I post then. And check spelling.))

((What exactly is going on? I'm lost D: ))

((We all got in a fight with Shadownight (MIsty... stab....) and now Xiau(Me) is embaressed and Avalik is with Zephyr (I think)))

((Can Sorathem RP with Zephyr?))

((If ya want))

(What to do?)

Delilah Nemidah wrote:

((Can Sorathem RP with Zephyr?))

[Sure- but could you start?]

((Sure... what exactly does Zephyr look like?))

[Hmm... let me find my form.]

((Here: DETAILED description: Zephyr's base coat is completely jet-black, but he has silver furs [not because he's old] within his coat that give him a unique light and dark contrast. As far as battle-scars go, he has one long and deep scratch down his left hind leg which has not yet fully healed. His nose has also been wounded which has reduced his ability to scent. Despite this, Zephyr is very muscular and fleet-footed so that he has an advantage in battle, and his hearing exceeds the average wolf. His eyes are green, but they have a tint of silver under light.))

(( back ppl! So whats happin', What did i miss?))


(( Xaiu, Avalik is right beside you. LOL)

Avalik was done eating, and hid the bones behind a bush. She whined, and lie down under a shady tree.

Avalik got up and gazed around. She wondered if anyone liked her...