WeatherClan.Power of the almighty clan!DARE to join!

Your looking for a spot to rest with a storm approaching.You see thick clouds coming.Lightning strikes and a cat appers.Go away from WeatherClan property.The cat says seeing you are fearless.If you'd like you can join.The wolf says.Do you DARE to join!!!.Well this is my first one so don't make fun.Fourm~Name~ Gender~ Rank Spot~ Description~ Personalitiy~ Other~.Name:Showerstar Gender~Male Rank Spot~Leader Description~Ruby red eyes & Coal black fur Personalitiy~Strong,Brave,Nice & Faithful Other~No.Name:Starflower Gender~Female Rank Spot~Warrior Description~Topaz eyes & Snow white fur Personalitiy~Strong,Brave,Nice,Faithful & Hopeful Other~No.

I know you're new to this, but since this is a wolf RP, it goes in the wolf/canine RP place and it'd be WeatherPack. ^^

Yeah, Blue is right. And also, you should do a vertical list, so that people can read it easier:

Quote :

Your looking for a spot to rest with a storm approaching. You see thick clouds coming. Lightning strikes and a cat appers. Go away from WeatherClan property. The wolf says seeing you are fearless. If you'd like you can join. The wolf says. Do you DARE to join?!

Well this is my first one so don't make fun.

Form~
Name~
Gender~
Rank Spot~
Description~
Personalitiy~
Other~.

Name:Showerstar
Gender~Male Rank
Spot~
Leader Description~Ruby red eyes & Coal black fur
Personalitiy~Strong,Brave,Nice & Faithful
Other~No.

Name:Starflower
Gender~Female
Rank Spot~Warrior
Description~Topaz eyes & Snow white fur
Personalitiy~Strong,Brave,Nice,Faithful & Hopeful
Other~No.

Something like that.

I changed it.