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Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 28 Location : MN
| Subject: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:50 pm | |
| CHAPTER 1 - Spoiler:
Chapter 1 ~ Brianna
I remember lying there, in the rubbish of the car. I remember looking down at his limp body, strewn across my lap, and just thinking why me, why him. I couldn't believe what was happening. One second we were singing along with the radio, the next, my best friend was dead on my lap. Why did it have to be us in that car crash? "Brianna." Why did he have to jump in front of that glass shard heading for me? "Brianna!" Why did he have to DIE? "BRIANNA!" "What!" "What in gods' name are you thinking about child? You're going to be late on your first day of High School." My mom. Wowser she can butt in at the worst moments. "Oh yeah, about that, I'm not going. I don't feel well." She put her hand to my forehead. "You don't feel warm." "It's not that kind of feeling bad mom." I swear she doesn't get me. "Well then you can go to school. You can deal with your drama with your friends at SCHOOL." She can be so insensitive at times, it irks me! "The death of my best friend is not 'drama' mom. I also don't have any friends at school because you made me MOVE, remember?" "That's what you were thinking about Bree? Honey that was over a year ago you need to get over it." Did I mention my mom and dad are practically twins? They're both insensitive, they both butt in, and they both DRIVE ME BONKERS. "Ugh, you don't get it! Neither of you do!" "It's not that big of a deal, dear." Now they speak at the same time. I swear they can read each others' minds. "Of course, not to you. My best friends died for me, it's a big deal!"And with that, I stomped off into the unknown world of a new school. And as far away from my parents as possible.
CHAPTER 2 - Spoiler:
Chapter 2 ~ Brianna
I shuffled into school and made my way to my locker. Crud monkeys, what was that combination again? Oh yeah. "23-2-30" "Pretty easy combination combination you got there." I jumped and spun around, a boy, about the same age as me I guessed, was standing t the locker across the aisle from mine. "Sorry to scare you, I'm Gage." He held his hand out to shake. "Bree." I retorted and turned back around, wihout shaking his hand. "You new here?" "Yes." I grabbed my math book and my work book. "Who do you have for math?" Does this guy ever give up? I looked at my schedule anyway. "Mr. Garrison." I replied weakly. "Awesome, we can walk together." I rolled my eyes, slammed my locker shut, and turned around. I put on a smile, but only because I had no idea how to get aroun this school. Gage lead me to Mr. Garrisons' room and took a seat in the back. I chose a set in the front, away from him. I saw a couple of girls huddled in a group, whispering, and glancing over at me. They weren't too far away, so I listened arefully to hear what they were saying. "Is that her?" "It can't be." "No, no it is, that's the girl that Cole guy died for." I got up and pretended I had to sharpen my pencil, since the sharpener was just behind them. I stopped when I reached them. "If you're wondering if I'm the girl 'that Cole guy' died saving, I am. And by the way, his name is Cole Ellingboe. Cole Daniel Ellingboe." I pushed past hem and sharpened my pencil to a point. They stared at me as I passed them again on my way back to my seat. ... After class, Gage caught up with me again. He's like a puppy, you can't shake him! "You really told them off!" He gave me a smirk. You know, one of those goofy, that was so cool, I'm proud of you, smirks. Cole used to give me that same exact smirk... I smiled at that. "Gage, I think we could possibly be very good friends." He gave me another one of those smirks.
CHAPTER 3 - Spoiler:
Chapter 3 ~ Gage
I walked home with Bree that day. Little did we know, we lived across the street from one another. Well I knew of course, but she didn't. There was a lot that Brianna Flood didn;t know about me.. I waved goodbye to her, and shouted across the street "See you tomorrow?" "You bet!" she called back, and went inside. I stepped inside my own house. When I closed the door, I yanked the wig off my head and shook out my real hair. "God I hate this thing." I grumbled and ran up to my room, taking the stairs two at a time. I threw the wig on my nightstand and grabbed my laptop. I plopped to the ground, opened the screen and just sat there for a while. My desktop was just a picture, but a picture of me and...excuse me...him and Bree. I shook it off and opened an IM from Troy. 'Did she buy it?' 'Like she was at a 70% off shoe sale.' I typed back. 'Awesome, can I come over?' 'No, the 'rents will be home soon.' As if on que, I heard the garage open. 'Speak of the devil.' I shut the screen and set the laptop on my bed. I headed for the stairs, taking my time this time around. I met my mom at the door. "Hi honey," she had groceries in her hands, "Could ou help me out and go get the rest?" I went out to her car, grabbed the rest of the bags, and shut the trunk. When I re-entered she asked, "So how was your first day back to school, Cole?"
CHAPTER 4 - Spoiler:
Chapter 4 ~ Gage
I went back to my room and grabbed my laptop off my bed. Troy hadn't replied since my last message, so I closed IM. I pulled up a game and sat there on my bedroom flor playing. After a while I got bored, so I went downstairs to the living room. Wile I was watching TV the doorbell rang. M mom checked who it was through the window and shouted back "It's Bree!" I ran up the steps calling back "Keep her busy!" My mom had dyed her hair since Bree last saw her, so she wouldn't recognize her. I heard Bree ask "Is Gage still home?" just as I entered my room to get the wig. I carefully finished covering my real hair s my mom called up "Gage!" "Yeah mom?" I shouted down to her. "A girl is here, says her name is Bree!" I walked down the stairs again, what was that, four? Five times today? "hey Bree, what'cha need?" "I forgot to ask, what's your last name? So I can add you on FaceBook." she asked. "I don't have a FaceBook." I answered simply. "Well, we should make you one. Where's your computer?" she looked around expectantly. "Broken." I commented blandly. A lie of course, but I didn't want her to see my desktop! "Can we do it at your place?" "Sure!" Her answer was almost too quick. "I'm headed to Brees'!" I called to my mom as I left my house.. No response, that meant okay! ... When I entered her room, it was almost too familiar. The one chalkboard wall with a variety of colors and sayings everywhere. The black chalkboard stars of all sizes on the other three white walls. Even the pink bedding, paintings and accesories. Music was playing in the background just as I remembered. This time it was Candyman by Christina Aguilera. She pulled up FaceBook on her laptop and turned to me. "So what's your last name?"
CHAPTER 5 - Spoiler:
Chapter 5 ~ Brianna I typed as Gage answered the questions that were needed to start. First Name: Gage Last Name: Larson He read the questions over my shoulder, and I could feel his warm moist breath. It made my skin crawl. I curled my toes, digging them deep into my black shag rug on the hard wood floor. I hated not having my own space. ... Did I mention I am claustraphoebic? I didn't? Oh silly me, I started telling you my story without telling you who I am first! My name is Brianna Rose Flood, born to Jerry and Kimberly Flood on June 13th. Zodiac sign, Gemini, born the year of the rat, 1996. I am fourteen, four foot nine, and a freshman in high school. Medical conditions include claustraphoebia, asthma, and ADHD. Now that you know who I am, back to the main point. ... "Can you please BACK AWAY?!" I hissed. "Oh, sorry, I forgot." At that time I didn't comprehend that he said 'I forgot' instead of 'I didn't know'. I'd never told him that I needed my own space, but now I know that he'd already known. I got bored of typing, so I changed the song, and started to sing. Gage did too. Chapter 6 ~ BriannaI don't know how long we stayed there singing. All of Glitter in the Air, Tigerlily, and most of Alice is what I can remember. The last song was interupted by my mom throwing my bedroom door open. "He has to go." She had that 'NOW' kind of look on her face. "Sorry Gage, see you tomorrow?" "See ya' tomorrow Bree." He called back. I saw him and my mother catch eachothers eyes as she followed him with her gaze all the way out. She shut the door behind him and turned to me, crossing her arms impatiently. "Who is he?" Her lips barely moved when she spoke, uh oh, that's not a good sign. "A guy, I met him at school. You're the one who told me I'd make new friends, I did." I retorted smuggly. "I meant girlfriends. Aren't you tired of hanging around with guys all the time?" "No." "Well something's different about this one, I feel like I've seen him somewhere before." She put her finger to her chin as she thought about who. "You know who he looks like? Cole." "Oh mom, please don't." I burried my face under a throw pillow that had fallen off my bed. "I'm just saying there's an amazing likeness between the two. I think it's why he caught your attention." No, he caught my attention because he wouldn't leave me alone. "Mom." The irritation in my voice was muffles through the plush fabric. "You need to let it go honey, come on." "MERM! Get out!" I screamed and chucked the pillow, hitting her in the face. She glared at me, clearly I was going to pay for that, for everything. For calling her merm, she hated that, for screaming at her, and especially for throwing the pillow at her face. It got her to leave though. I sighed and climbed into y bed, covering my head with the thick cool comforter. Sorry the chapters are so short! I swear they look a LOT bigger in my journal.
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| | | Rebecca The Admins
Posts : 2831 Join date : 2009-04-13 Age : 28 Location : Hello, hello, hola! In this place called Vertigo.
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:07 am | |
| D= WHY DID YOU START OFF WITH SOMEONE DYING? DO YOU WANT ME TO GO INSANE WITH AWESOMENESS? HUH? xD, I'm kidding. BUT IT'S REALLY GOOD. Can you PLEASE write more on it? Consiter me interested enough to want to know what in the world is going on. | |
| | | BreeLilly RP Lover
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 28 Location : MN
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:18 am | |
| To answer your questions. I start off with someone dying because it INTRIGUES me. Muahahaha. Yes, I would enjoy watching you go insane with awesomeness Rebecca, would very much enjoy watching that, I bet it's better tha fireworks! And lastly, maybe I'll start writing more tomorrow. :) | |
| | | Ochre Pumpkin Pie Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2008-03-15 Location : ...I can hear your stomach growling...
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:36 am | |
| Death! One of my favorite things! Dude, you seriously need to continue this before I kill Bex because I went insane, before she can actually die of insanity!
...Does that make sense? XD | |
| | | BreeLilly RP Lover
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 28 Location : MN
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Wed Jul 14, 2010 3:48 pm | |
| Death is one of my favorite things too. Wow, that sounds REALLY creepy coming from me. Yeah, that makes sense..sort of. UPDATE: Chapter 2 IS UP! | |
| | | Ochre Pumpkin Pie Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:42 pm | |
| =D
That is all I have to say. XD | |
| | | Rebecca The Admins
Posts : 2831 Join date : 2009-04-13 Age : 28 Location : Hello, hello, hola! In this place called Vertigo.
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:46 pm | |
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| | | ❝ lauren ❞ The Admins
Posts : 10853 Join date : 2008-10-26 Age : 26 Location : in london, of course.
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:00 pm | |
| Wow. I LOVE IT. You need to write more. Okay? Good. xD | |
| | | BreeLilly RP Lover
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 28 Location : MN
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:50 pm | |
| UPDATED: CHAPTER 3 IS HERE! This one is really short. sorry. O.O I was having brain block, and I pinky promised Bec 'd write more TODAY. I never break a pinky promise. ^^ | |
| | | ❝ lauren ❞ The Admins
Posts : 10853 Join date : 2008-10-26 Age : 26 Location : in london, of course.
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:55 pm | |
| Ohmigosh. I can't tell if Cole is being mean or good. Grr. MORE. I NEED KNOWLEDGE. | |
| | | Ochre Pumpkin Pie Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2008-03-15 Location : ...I can hear your stomach growling...
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:52 pm | |
| WAT. YOU WILL WRITE MORE NOW. | |
| | | ❝ lauren ❞ The Admins
Posts : 10853 Join date : 2008-10-26 Age : 26 Location : in london, of course.
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:55 pm | |
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| | | Ochre Pumpkin Pie Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2008-03-15 Location : ...I can hear your stomach growling...
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:58 pm | |
| Yeah, it's like Otter's when I stabbed him in the lung for taking my cookie.
...IT WAS MY COOKIE, DANGIT!
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| | | BreeLilly RP Lover
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 28 Location : MN
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Mon Jul 19, 2010 5:19 pm | |
| Hmm, I don't know, is he good or evil. Muahaha. :D I will not write more now Socky! I refuse! Maybe tomorrow...^^ That was not nice, stealing cookies is just NOT right. O.O | |
| | | Suburbia One Special Member!
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| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Mon Jul 19, 2010 10:19 pm | |
| First, I was like this: Then, I was like this: And now, I'm like this: | |
| | | Anamosa
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| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 10:53 am | |
| Bree, your journal is like HALF the size of a regular notebook, maybe even less! No wonder your chapters are so small. xD And don't even get me STARTED on your penmenship, I could barely even read it in that little book of yours! But it's a good story, and you MUST KEEP GOING. ^^ <3 Madeline | |
| | | BreeLilly RP Lover
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 28 Location : MN
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 10:55 am | |
| I'm assuming that's a GOOD thing Suburbia? Hmm? Am I right? xD Oh Mad, shut your pie hole, at least my writing isn't he size of an ant. Oh yeah, I went there. xP Hehe. | |
| | | Ochre Pumpkin Pie Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:05 am | |
| The only thing that can shut my pie hole is pie. | |
| | | BreeLilly RP Lover
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 28 Location : MN
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:08 am | |
| What KIND of pie Socky? I don't like pie, except for hershey pie, french silk pie, oreo pie, and pumpkin pie. Fruit pies at just icky..xP | |
| | | Rebecca The Admins
Posts : 2831 Join date : 2009-04-13 Age : 28 Location : Hello, hello, hola! In this place called Vertigo.
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:11 am | |
| xDD, WAIT, GAGE IS NOT GAGE? WHATINTHEWORLD? WHO THE HECK IS COLE?! WRITE MORE AND I WILL WRITE THE PREFACE TO THE IMMORTALS. | |
| | | Ochre Pumpkin Pie Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2008-03-15 Location : ...I can hear your stomach growling...
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:17 am | |
| I like a lot of pie. On March 14, in 6th grade, our math teacher called it Pi Day. She let people bring in pies of all kind. I like cherry, pumpkin, apple, and derby. And at Otter's place, his little sister made a chocolate pie that tasted like awesome.
XD We should start a pie club.
OH EM GEE, BEX. LIKE YOU SHUD TOTES RITE THAT PROLOG LIKE RITE NOW. LOL.
And you, Bree, YOU will be writing Chapter 4. | |
| | | BreeLilly RP Lover
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 28 Location : MN
| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 2:41 pm | |
| Oh you meanie Bec! Tempting me with The Immortals. Grr. :|
Pi Day! I love Pi Day! Every year we got T-Shirts, and played Pi Games, it was really fun, oh yeah, and we got to eat PIE too. :D
Jeez Socky, so demanding..O.O UPDATED: CHAPTER 4 IS NOW UP AND READY TO GO! I SOO just described my dream room for when my dad remodels my closet! :D | |
| | | Ochre Pumpkin Pie Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 2:44 pm | |
| WAT.
Ohh, buddy, you're gonna have to improvise now. I don't think I like Gage/Cole. If he was real, I would take a garotte and -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------.
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| | | ❝ lauren ❞ The Admins
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| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 3:53 pm | |
| SOCKY. NONO.
BREE. WRITEMORE. | |
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| Subject: Re: Secrets [Chapter 6] Tue Jul 20, 2010 6:54 pm | |
| This is really good Bree! Chapter Five. Now. Please. (=
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