| Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:25 am | |
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Plot
In DawnClan, there was a young apprentice named Lionpaw. His mother, Sandstripe, gave birth to his brother, but the cruel tan-and-black father, Duskpelt, instantly killed the kit by throwing it against the ground. "There will be no more kits in DawnClan! LostClan will take us all!" And Duskpelt dashed out of the nursery.
LostClan? As far as all of DawnClan knew the other Clan had never attacked them. Was Duskpelt saying that their alliance had suddenly been broken by something? Or was he going to go convince LostClan to "take us all?"
The next thing DawnClan knew, Duskpelt had disappeared into the scattered woods.
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Then, one fateful night, a kit was born by Goldenclaw. The kit had forebodingly black fur with one white paw. After the latter, his mother named him Onekit.
The next day, rustling could be heard in nearby bushes on the dawn patrol. The cats reported back to Dawnstar, but by the time they were sent to investigate there was no sign of anything; not even pawtracks. Scent wasn't an option; the strong-smelling mint leaves crowded the area.
The cats dashed back to camp, and told the leader that they had discovered nothing.
And then, they were hit when they least expected it.
In the middle of the day, badgers came charging into camp, but only seemed to be aimed for one den: the nursery. After the attack Goldenclaw lay dead in her nest, her body shielding her only kit, who had blended into the dark shadows.
Everyone was asking the same question: Are any of these events connected?
Our Mission
- Find out the meaning of the phrase "LostClan will take us all."
- Search for evidence on if the events are connected or purely coincidental.
- Discover the reason Duskpelt committed murder and fled.
- Find out where he went and why.
- Prepare for battle; it may be necessary.
- Restore peace to DawnClan.
Rules 1. All RPC rules apply. 2. You can have as many characters as you like. 3. Character cannot be in LostClan. 4. Use decent spelling and grammar. Each post must be at least three sentences long. 5. No chain posting. It leaves the rest of us behind with pointless discussions. 6. No godmoding or perfect characters. 7. No attacking other cats without both users' permission. 8. Be respectful. 9. No controlling anyone else's character unless otherwise mentioned. 10. Keep it PG - Only cat cussing.
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[b]Name:[/b] [b]Gender:[/b] [b]Age:[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] If it's a picture, link to it. [b]Personality:[/b] Doesn't have to be too long. [b]Bio:[/b] Optional. [b]Rank:[/b] [b]Mate:[/b] [b]Kits:[/b] [b]Siblings:[/b] [b]Parents:[/b] [b]Other:[/b] My Characters
Name: Lionpaw Gender: Male Age: 6.5 moons Appearance: A short-haired tom with green eyes and fur the color of the inner bark of a redwood tree. Personality: Lionpaw is respectful and caring, and also loving towards his mother. However he is also a bit clumsy but tries his best nonetheless. Bio: He had a brother who was killed just after birth by his unorthodox father, named Duskpelt. Rank: Apprentice Mate: Kits: Siblings: Unnamed (Dead), Onekit Parents: Sandstripe, Duskpelt Other:
Name: Onekit Gender: Male Age: 4 moons Appearance: Onekit Personality: Onekit is shy and usually runs away from any cat bigger than him. He loves to play with his stepbrother Lionpaw when he's not busy. He is also very curious and will chase anything that moves and is smaller than him. Bio: His mother was killed by a badger just before Duskpelt's disappearance. Mate: Kits: Siblings: Lionpaw Parents: Sandstripe (foster) and Duskpelt (foster), Goldenclaw (dead) and ??? Other:
AllegiancesDawnClanLeader - ??? Deputy - ??? Warriors - Duskpelt - Tan tabby tom with black stripes and yellow eyes. Currently missing from DawnClan. Deemed insane by some. (Khalamari) Tigerstripe - Sand-colored tom with copper eyes. (Superglue) Minnowpool - Silver-gray she cat with ice-blue eyes. (Hollypool) Falcontail - Dark-grey she-cat with a cream-colored underbelly and golden eyes. Medicine Cat - ??? Queens - Sandstripe - Russet-red she-cat with green eyes. (Khalamari) Blueflower - Long-furred she-cat with blue eyes whose pelt is colored in many shades of gray and gray-blue. Icewhisker - Pure white she-cat with moss-green eyes. (Wildcat) Elders - Apprentices - Lionpaw - Short-haired tom with green eyes whose fur is the color of redwood tree bark. - Mentor: Minnowpool (Khalamari) Kits - Onekit - Long-haired tom with white muzzle and paws.. Amber eyes. (Khalamari) Season - Early Newleaf
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Lan Fan Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2810 Join date : 2008-10-30 Age : 27 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:51 am | |
| Name: Tigerstripe Gender: Male Age: 19 moons Appearance: HerePersonality: Serious but quick-thinking and strategical, Tigerstripe is very loyal to his Clan and mate, Blueflower. He is brave and doesn't give up, especially in an attack. However, he is short-tempered, and it's not good to get on his bad side. The only one he almost never seems to get mad at is Blueflower. He is especially excited because it should only be a quarter moon or less until she gives birth to kits. Bio: As an only kit, he was often lonely, until Blueflower was born. He played with her a lot and has been close to her ever since. Rank: Warrior Mate: Blueflower Kits:Siblings: Parents: Leafflower (Female) and Breezestream (Male) Other: I was just going to put M and F for Leafflower and Breezestream; the problem is, M can stand for mother as well as male, and F can stand for father as well as female. Those are opposites. Also, mind if he's mentor to Lionpaw? Name: Blueflower Gender: Female Age: About eighteen moons Appearance: Except fatterPersonality: Calm but sensitive and easily upset, Blueflower is timid. She tends to shy away from things but is smart and knows what to do in tough situations, except kitting. She hasn't had a litter before and isn't that confident about herself. Bio: Mind if I leave this out? Rank: Queen Mate: Tigerstripe Kits: Siblings:Parents: Cloudfur (Male) and Marshfoot (Female) Other: | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2398 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 27 Location : Go google it - if you can get past the eggplants.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:57 am | |
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Lan Fan Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2810 Join date : 2008-10-30 Age : 27 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:58 am | |
| Can I start RPing yet? :-D
First time in a while I used a smiley with a nose. | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2398 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 27 Location : Go google it - if you can get past the eggplants.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 12:01 pm | |
| I'd like to, but my threads never get any members other than you for some reason.... | |
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Lan Fan Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 12:14 pm | |
| Tigerstripe curled protectively around his mate, nosing her on her muzzle. "Did you sleep well, Blueflower?"
She nodded, her tail over her side. Her dark face looked like she had been smeared with soot, but her eyes were bright with excitement. However, there was a twinkle of unsureness in them.
As if he could read the message, Tigerstripe reassured, "You'll be fine." He gazed at the nursery wall, as if it were transparent and he could see inside the den next to it. If only we had a medicine cat... | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 3:44 pm | |
| (I never said we could start! :] ) | |
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Peachfrost Original
Posts : 5511 Join date : 2008-03-26 Location : Dear Gravity, you've held me down in this starless city.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:00 pm | |
| Name: MinnowpoolGender: She-catAge:16 moonsAppearance: http://jezzlin.deviantart.com/art/Fezzik-the-Frenzied-101950942Personality: The only apparent She-cat of the Clan besides the queen, Minnowpool has kept her own and stuck it out with the boys. She is as strong willed and stubborn as a tom, and has the stamina and strength to go along with it. But, at a certain time of the year, she is always taken down from a serious deseas, in which she is horrible sick and goes particially blind for almost a moon. Though can be snappy and rude, is generally kind. Bio: none, except she comes from a long line of ThunderClan cats. Rank: WarriorMate: Is looking...Kits: None.Siblings: Fallenheart, her sister of 25 moons(now Fallenstar, leader of another Clan *hinthint*) Parents: Mother-unknown. deceased. Father- Ashfur of ThunderClan, the 1st gen. Other: Is facinated by the stars and sky. | |
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Violet Boopala(pirate) Trustworthy Member
Posts : 1443 Join date : 2008-10-27 Age : 30 Location : Practicing on my guitar.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 9:00 pm | |
| Name: Icewhisker Gender: She-cat Age: 19 moons Appearance: Pure white with moss green eyes Personality: Kind to those weaker than herself, but generally a bit gruff. Kind of like Yellowfang from the books. She's also very suspicious of strangers. Bio: Rank: Queen Mate: yes, but no one knows who it is. Kits: Not yet, but very soon! Siblings: Falcontail Parents: Ripplefeather [mother~dead] Emberfoot [father~missing, assumed dead] Other: Nope!
Name: Falcontail Gender: She-cat Age: 19 moons Appearance: Dark grey with a cream underbelly and golden eyes. Personality: Rough and brave, a bit fierce, but kind to cats she knows well. Bio: Rank: Warrior Mate: None. Kits: Nope. Siblings: Icewhisker Parents: **same as Icewhiskers', obviously** Other: Nope! | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2398 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 27 Location : Go google it - if you can get past the eggplants.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 10:53 pm | |
| Hm... I have no idea why, but something tells me not to accept these.
Accepted!~ It's about time we had more members xD | |
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Lan Fan Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:44 pm | |
| ((Khalamari means no offense, of course.))
Tigerstripe padded out into the clearing, taking a fish from the kill pile and handing it to his mate.
Blueflower thanked him with a nod as he exited again, and nibbled on the fish. After having eaten her share, she turned to Icewhisker. "Want some?" | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:20 am | |
| ((NOW we can start!
Is anyone willing to be a mentor for Lionpaw?
For now, the deputy, leader and med cat will be NPCs (Whiteclaw, Dawnstar and Berryfoot respectively, names may change when someone signs up for them)))
Onekit yawned. It was dawn, and maybe a bit past. He swished his furry tail and stood up, shaking the sleep and dust from his pelt. Sandstripe cringed a bit, but looked at her kit lovingly. Onekit looked at her with deep eyes and skipped merrily into the middle of camp.
Lionpaw sat on the edge of the camp, near the entrance, which was a burrow-like hole in a tall tree. His tail was curled around his tiny paws. | |
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Lan Fan Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:22 am | |
| ((Mind if I pass on that?))
Blueflower flicked her gaze to Sandstripe, wondering what it was like to have such a rambunctious kit. The round queen chuckled. "I hope my kits aren't a lot of trouble." | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2398 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 27 Location : Go google it - if you can get past the eggplants.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:00 am | |
| Sandstripe looked up. "Well, he can be troublesome, but he's a good companion."
Onekit was glancing at his brother from across the camp and dashed over to him.
The red apprentice looked down and smiled. "How's it going, Onekit?" He gave a gentle, playful cuff over the black cat's ear. A small, toothless nip was returned on his scruff.
((By the way, Sandstripe is a minor character and can be slightly controlled by anyone - that is, if someone's talking to her you don't have to wait for me to make her answer.)) | |
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Peachfrost Original
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:18 pm | |
| (Ams back! ^^) Minnowpool yawned, and lazily drew a paw over her ear. The silvery tabby pulled herself to her paws and made way for the entrance of camp. "Does anyone want to come with me on a hunting patrol?" she looked back, seeing a few cats pulling away from their dens. | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2398 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 27 Location : Go google it - if you can get past the eggplants.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:28 pm | |
| Lionpaw looked up, ignoring the hyper kit bouncing at his paws. "We'll probably need Whiteclaw's permission first."
He heard the deputy's meow from the warriors' den, which was close enough to the entrance of the camp. "I was going to put Minnowpool in anyway. By the way, Lionpaw, have you gotten a mentor yet?"
"No!" came the red tom's honest reply. He flicked his ears towards the nursery, and Onekit followed them.
"I'd like to go," Lionpaw said, standing up and stalking towards Minnowpool. | |
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Peachfrost Original
Posts : 5511 Join date : 2008-03-26 Location : Dear Gravity, you've held me down in this starless city.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 6:17 pm | |
| ( I would'nt mind being his mentor, if you don't mind, that is ^-^) Minnowpool responded with a brief nod and a smile. "Anyone else?" she asked lastly, and when no one else reacted she turned back to Lionpaw. "Well, lets get going." she meowed, and took off into the thick forest. The tabby warrior found a patch of sunlight pouring through the tree branches', and it seemed so had a thrush. She instantly fell into the hunter's crouch and began taking slow pawsteps toward it. | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 7:50 pm | |
| ((Yep, I asked XD))
Lionpaw nodded and darted after his mentor. He slowed down and remained silent when she started stalking the thrush. He didn't want to cause her to lose her prey... the thrush seemed not to notice and was busy pecking for seeds.
Back at the camp, Onekit was laying in the curve of Sandstripe's belly, resting. Bouncing around took a lot of energy. | |
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Violet Boopala(pirate) Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 8:12 pm | |
| Icewhisker was curled up in a patch of sunlight, dozing. Soft snores rose from her. Falcontail padded to the pile of fresh-kill, and picked out a plump mouse. Picking it up, she padded over to her sister. Prodding her with one forepaw, she woke her. "Want this mouse?" She asked simply. Icewhisker blinked a few times as her eyes got used to the sunlight, then nodded and began eating. | |
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Lan Fan Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Sun Mar 01, 2009 8:34 pm | |
| "I'll come," Tigerstripe said, following after them. He glanced back one more time at Blueflower. His eyes were slightly sad, but then brightened again as he thought of the kits... | |
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Posts : 5511 Join date : 2008-03-26 Location : Dear Gravity, you've held me down in this starless city.
| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:31 pm | |
| Minnowpool's pale eyes were focused intently on the prey only a few tail lengths away. The grey tabby then launched precisely at it, so quick the Thrush barely had time to look back at her. She killed it with a short bite to the neck and turned back to meet up with the others. "Delicious day for hunting!" she mewed, smirking. | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Thu Mar 05, 2009 9:02 pm | |
| ((Isn't smirking to smile rudely?))
Lionpaw nodded, although he didn't appear to be paying much attention. He turned his head to one side and started to creep that way. He wanted to check for prey, and that was when scenting came to his mind. He opened his jaws slightly, picking up a faint trace of squirrel. It was rather stale, but the prey had come this way. | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: Broken Bonds ~ Part One: Death Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:10 pm | |
| ((How did this thing die so fast?)) | |
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