~ShimmerClan~ (This is my first warrior RP ever, please don't laugh.)

Last edited by Akeria on Tue Sep 23, 2008 2:39 pm; edited 2 times in total

Welcome to ShimmerClan
Where bounderies are set.

You wander along. Is there water here? You wonder. You stop at a small stream and begin to drink greedily. You hear a fierce sound behind you and you freeze. The cat behind you becomes friendly.
"May I ask what you're doing on my land?" He bellows. His fur is a golden color, which compliments his onyx colored eyes nicely. You don't answer the question. "You won't live to have another chance to answer." The fierce cat says. You quickly answer with an explination telling of how far you've traveled. "You may stay with my clan." He says. "I am Featherdust, leader of ShimmerClan, and if you value you're life, you will join." Do you accept?

Do you accept?

Rules:
*Please no posting in blue or red.*
*No god-modeling, or any of the other stuff we hate.*
*5 days till mating, another 7 till kits.*
*This is my first 'warrior' RP, so please don't laugh at me.*

Form:

Name:
Gender:
Rank Requested:
Description (No pictures please.):
Anything else?:

My Form:

Name: Featherstar
Gender: Male
Rank Requested: He is leader.
Description: Golden colored cat with deep onyx colored eyes.
Anything else?: Nope.

Leader:

Featherdust (cowattack3)

Deputy:

Stormeyes (Blue_Brawl_Freak)

Med. Cat

Moonfeather (Blankfeather)

Med. Cat Apprentice

Ashpaw (newms)

Warriors:

Iceflower (Roleplaylover23)
Sunpelt (newms)
Yarrowleaf (lilhorselover)

Apprenticies:

Queens:

Kits:

News:
*This is the first Warrior RP I've ever started, please let me know if you think there is
anything I can improve upon to make Shimmer better. Thank you*

XD Featherdust, leader?

Name: Stormeyes
Gender: male
Rank Requested: Deputy
Description (No pictures please.): A light gray average musled, sleek male with bright blue eyes.
Anything else?: He is very kind, but you shouldn't call him weak...

Name: Moonfeather
Gender: Female
Rank Requested: Med. Cat, but has some confusions.
Description (No pictures please.): A white female with two scarlet feathers behind her left ear. A black feather fits inbetween the scarlet feathers.
Anything else?: Is Blankfeather's daughter. (Sieriously. Blankfeather is my main Warrior Cat.)

One Special Member! Posts : 5157 Join date : 2008-03-25

((Good so far, just that all leaders have 'star' at the end of their name, hence he would be called Featherstar))
((I have a leader named Featherstar, except she's a girl))

Name: Morningleaf
Gender: Female
Rank Requested: May 'try out' for deputy
Description (No pictures please.): A sleek, gray she-cat. Her eyes are a surprising sunrise-like orange (hence the name!).
Anything else?: Nope, her brother may come along soon though.

((I think they've explained it well, enough. He would be Featherstar, not featherdust.))
Name: Ashpaw
Gender: Female
Rank Requested: Med-cat apprentice.
Description (No pictures please.): A fluffy gray she-cat with darker gray speckles on her flank and muzzle. Her eyes are a pastel-green colour.
Anything else?: Sunpelt's daughter.

Name: Sunpelt
Gender: Male
Rank Requested: Deputy, but he's cool with warrior status.
Description (No pictures please.): A short-furred orange tom with pastel green eye, and surpisingly long legs. Brown ears and tail-tip.
Anything else?: Father of Ashpaw, but his old mate is dead. =[ May want a new one....

(Not to be rude, but I'm sticking up for 'keria! Her leader's name can be whatever she wants! It doesn't have to end in 'star'! *huff*)

One Special Member! Posts : 5157 Join date : 2008-03-25

((I suppose, I'm just saying ^))

((I'm sorry, but I'm calling her cowattack. xD This is a warrior RP, so it should probably end in 'star'. Now, she could call it a 'modified' warrior RP...))

((You're all accepted, thanks. Ummmmmmmm yeah... Featherstar... :())

((*Outraged at everyone but Keria* Now she's sad! GO AWAY! *Scampers over.* It dosen't have to be Featherstar, it can be whatever you want. ONly listen to them if it's their thread, and no, it's NOT.))

One Special Member! Posts : 5157 Join date : 2008-03-25

((You can leave it at Featherdust if you want...))

((No, it's fine. I didn't understand. I've never read any of the books, so I didn't know about things that tended to apply to clans.))

One Special Member! Posts : 5157 Join date : 2008-03-25

((Ok, well that's about it then... do you know the apprentince ends in paw thing?))
((If you want, you can look at my Clan thread... it's the one that has DewClan, MistClan, and ShadeClan))

((I did know that. And worriors can end in whatever they want right? I'm gunna need some guidance, which is why I put the note at the bottom.))

One Special Member! Posts : 5157 Join date : 2008-03-25

((Yeah, and kits end in kit))

((Okay.))

One Special Member! Posts : 5157 Join date : 2008-03-25

((SOoooo... RP?))

((Well, Pumpkin 'splained it pretty good. You saw Shadowsown posted a warrior code on WI, right? You can always check that too, Cowattack!))

One Special Member! Posts : 5157 Join date : 2008-03-25

((I haven't seen that... I dont go on WI that often anymore))

((Oh yeah!! Rp anyone?))

(ME!)

One Special Member! Posts : 5157 Join date : 2008-03-25

((I will too!))

((Alrighty. Except for the fact that none of you are here right now... XD When you get home...))

name: Yarrowleaf
gender: tom
description: all calico with a black and pink smudged nose. His tail and ears are greyish, whitish tipped, and his paws looked like he just stepped out of a fire.
rank requested: wants deputy
other: notta:)

((Acceptified.))

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