Black&&White - Greyson Academy for the Gifted ~ Semi-Elite - Plot ADDED!

Full Name - Blackwithe, Jay Kara
Age - 14
Grade - 9th
Description - peach, slightly tanned skin, dark reddish gold eyes, tinted with silver. silvery brown hair, down to ribs, which is slightly wavy and tangles quite easily. about 4" 11', quite short, abnormally large eyes, long fingers, skinny, underweight, but well-built.
Personality - untrusting, but if she opens herself up, she's sweet, loyal (sometimes too loyal) and trys to be as helpful as possible.
History - She remembers only this: a long time ago, she had a very good friend. This mysterious girl was her best friend in the whole wide world. But then she lost this good friend. The friend had to leave, for her benefit, and now Jay doesn't like opening up to people because of her lost friend. She became withdrawn, and avoided girls especially.
Powers -Special connection with animals, senses 'auras (a mix of emotions, some shadow of their history, etc.)
Other - I think I pretty much covered everything.

Brianna folded her arms behind her back and scanned the room again, people were beginning to leave. She stood on her toes and lowered herself again, she did this repeatedly, giving her calfs a small workout, and just saving herself from boredom. She didn't want to go back to her dorm room again, not yet, but for one of the first times in her life, she was shy in a smaller group of people. She played with a bow string that was on her shirt behind her back, keeping herself occupied.

Alyssia walked out of the office, looking over her schedule. "First, second, homeroom, related arts..." She mumbled down the list while walking back to their dorm. She completely disregarded Gabriel, and walked down torwards the room, food, and sleep. After quickly running through the lists, she plopped down on the bed as soon as she got into the dorm. Gabriel could survive, right? After all, it's not like someone would need her help or anything. Or, would they? No. Alyssia forced the thought out of her head, and traced her finger over the school map.
Gabriel trotted slightly out of the doorframe, and stopped, glancing through all the people. There seemed to be a gap in the crowd, maybe roughly three by six feet tall....That's wierd....Riel repeated inside her head. She walked torwards it and saw a tenth grader lying motionlessly in the middle of the hallway. She slapped her hand to her forehead, and kneeled down torwards his shoulders. The boy was really pale, looked about 15 despite his theatrical white hair. She took two fingers to his neck, still had a pulse. Gabriel guessed that he had passed out after exhaustion from his powers, or something. She hesitated for a minute, and then slung him over her shoulder with slight effort. her legs bent for a minute, but then she walked- or should i say stumbled, to a janitor's alleyway. The emergency exit sign buzzed and flickered, and she leaned his body against the wall. Well, Ri. You found someone passed out. Think- if you can turn someone unconcious, maybe you can reverse it! She thought in her head, trying to remember how she had done it to that guard at the foster home. She had tapped into his mind, and then imagined it shortcircuting like a wire, and then black. Just like that the guard had passed out. Complete the circut. her voice echoed inside of her.

(I'll do my best to try and stay off of this, but I already had the above typed out when I saw your message. Just this one...)

i'm posting this again.
sorry if it's annoying, but i SO want to join.

Full Name - Blackwithe, Jay Kara
Age - 14
Grade - 9th
Description - peach, slightly tanned skin, dark reddish gold eyes, tinted with silver. silvery brown hair, down to ribs, which is slightly wavy and tangles quite easily. about 4" 11', quite short, abnormally large eyes, long fingers, skinny, underweight, but well-built.
Personality - untrusting, but if she opens herself up, she's sweet, loyal (sometimes too loyal) and trys to be as helpful as possible.
History - She remembers only this: a long time ago, she had a very good friend. This mysterious girl was her best friend in the whole wide world. But then she lost this good friend. The friend had to leave, for her benefit, and now Jay doesn't like opening up to people because of her lost friend. She became withdrawn, and avoided girls especially.
Powers -Special connection with animals, senses 'auras (a mix of emotions, some shadow of their history, etc.)
Other - I think I pretty much covered everything.

Gabriel nodded- My name's Riel. She said telepathically. Mute, if you're wondering. I can help him, but it takes absoulute concentration. The tenth grader played over and over again how she had did it the first time- shortcircut, black. Shortcircut, black. Gabriel ran her fingers through her hair, and then touched both temples. She closed her eyes, and replayed the last memory she could find in his head. Stumbling from the doorframe, and collapsing. She threw herself at it- and stopped playing it right as it began to fade. The 16 year old took a deep breath, and lit up the memory. Riel pushed herself out, and opened her eyes back in her body, leaning up against the wall. That was easier than i remember... She said to Rebecca, having learned her name earlier. Gabriel looked over at Jin, he was breathing again and seemed to be waking up. Just have to wait and see. If that didn't work I have to go back and erase the memory completely. She explained.

Melissa blinked at her, and nodded slowly. "Mm'kay." Melissa mumbled, trying to find a way to change the subject. Melissa noticed the fact that Alice was rocking back and forth, and rubbing her arms, which had goosebumps all over them. Melissa blinked, then realizing how cold it really was in here, she shivered slightly. "Heck, it's cold in here," Melissa shook her head in disbelief, "They need a better heating system, or something." Melissa complained quietly. Melissa pushed her curly auburn bangs out of her face, her arms still crossed tightly.
Everybody gets voice, hah. The voice scoffed, Not like Melissy, Melissy the schizophrenic!
Melissa ignored it, biting her lip so hard she could taste the blood as her teeth broke skin.

Alice nodded in agreement. She wondered when classes started when Melissa's annoying 'voice' filled her head again. She wondered how the tenth grader dealed with that. She rolled her eyes, deciding that Melissa didn't want to talk about it anymore. "I'm going to freeze." Alice sighed, her long blond ponytail bobbing as she continued rocking on her heels. Suddenly, she heard Rebecca yell help. Alice felt her skin prickle some more, but decided that someone who knew how to help was probably over there. She could tell by their thoughts that Jin had passed out. One girl, Gabriel seemed to be helping him through earsing the memory or something. Alice sucked in her breath then exhaled slowly, waiting. She glanced back at Melissa. "I think that one boy, Jin, fainted." She muttered quickly. "This is such a freaky day already." She added, but mostly to herself.

Gabriel clenched her hands, failing aggravated her so much. No. It's not over. Finish it! Gabriel put her right hand directly behind her ear and sighed. Alright. She had to get back in before the energy redrained. Riel tapped back into his mind, and replayed that memory again. This time she saw the light fade, and then grow dark again. She forced the memory to stay where it was lit, and erased it by imagining it fading gradually. It did start to fade, and she relit the energy as if it were a candle, and this time tore it to shreds. The memory faded quickly, and she came back. Jin was breathing heavily, and his eyelid were still fluttering. Come on...it's erased, torn, and relit. Wake up, Jin! She said telepathically in his head. if it didn't work yet again, she'd have to paralyze them both. His pulse was getting slower, and then accelerating, and repeating.

Full Name - Blackwithe, Jay Kara
Age - 14
Grade - 9th
Description - Jay has peach, and slightly tanned skin. She has dark reddish gold eyes that are tinted with silver and abnormally large. Jay also has silvery brown hair, down to ribs, which is slightly wavy and tangles quite easily. She has a height of about 4" 11', she's quite short, and long fingers. She's thin, a little bit underweight, (about 100 pounds). She's actually kind of pretty, but she has alot of tangled hair, making her look kind of like she has bedhair all the time.
Personality - Usually Jay is untrusting, but if she opens herself up, she's sweet, loyal (sometimes too loyal) and tries to be as helpful as possible. She's very cautious around other people, especially if she hasn't seen them before. If she's introduced to someone she'll act very callous and inward. She did make a few friends at a public school, but only because they were boys. Jay can be very demanding in a friendship, and is intelligent, a straight A student, and is proud of it. She took martial arts lessons, and got as far as a red belt (two below black), and has picked fights before. She's usually seemingly moody, and wears clothing according to her mood, usually dark grays, dark blue jeans, etc. When she does make a friend she asks that the person stays true to their friendship and doesn't just abandon her for weeks at time. In return she tries to be the best she can. She's somewhat guillible and quite innocent, despite her darkened appearence. Jay is a little mischevious, but doesn't like to spend time playing practical jokes, as she thinks they waste her time. Jay has a quite laugh, a small smile, but they can seem rewarding as they are rare. She can be a little bit unfeeling and hard, insensitive, but if someone's really in trouble she won't hesitate to help. her biggest fault is that she's so inward and moody most of the time. she thinks she can handle herself, and doesn't need any friends.
History - Jay really doesn't know much about her family. She was just sent off from some dark blue house with a woman who was her guardian to the school. She remembers some early memories, and a few awkward moments from when she tried to attend real school, but not much. She only remembers having one friend, who was a peppy girl. Jay can't remember her face, but she remembers the girl had short curly hair and purple highlights. The girl had been named Alison or something. Alison had moved away, so Jay became suspicious of making friends, especially girls. At one point, her guardian decided that public school was too much for her, so she decided that Jay must go to a special school for her own protection.
Powers -Jay has a special connection to animals, she can talk to them, which helps her to make friends. Jay also reads auras, meaning she can sense emotions, and some shadow of their personality. She cannot read thoughts though.
Other - I think I pretty much covered everything.

Is this better?

I had been running for a while now, forgetting to talk for a while. Well, I guess it's not like it would do any use, would it? Anyway, as I was running, I felt a bit of warmth. I looked up and saw that the spotlight that had been following me as grown brighter. This must've been the heat source, but why now? Knowing it was hopeless to keep going, I lied on the dark floor, hopelessly hoping that something would come from the light. Thankfully, I was answered with more heat and lightheaded-ness. However, this one was really weird, cause it was like I was just floating. I turned my head and saw that the floor had disappeared and instead just air. I felt a pulling force towards the light, that was gradually getting faster. Was this the gateway to heaven, or something worse than what I was in now. I was just a hair away from being over with it when I had stopped. Right from eternal salvation, I stopped. I felt a tingling in my cheek and felt the levitation fade away as I plunged into the darkness below. Great, I'm going to he-

My eyes shot open as I saw myself on the hallway floor, with two girls who I'd never seen in my life. I couldn't remember much at all, actually. Everyone that was there, everything, just so brand new.

((Oh yeah, you know what happened))

(ok...yeah, sorry about that. i'm not very good at developing the personality. usually i kind of have to see how my characters going to interact with the others first.)

Gabriel growled. Oh, great. Um, Rebecca, Jin's not going to remember much.... Riel explained, running her hand across the back of her neck. Gawd, that's what happened the last time she tried to fix things. She'd knock the guard out, but when he did wake up he didn't even remember what his name was. Sorry. Really am, but, um Jin, he- Crap. This was going to be hard trying to explain this to Jin, and to Rebecca. God, how do you explain to someone that you wiped out their best friend's memory??

Melissa raised an eyebrow at Jin, who'd just come to, but he looked totally and utterly confused. Melissa'd passed out many times before, tripping and hitting her head, getting queasy, and then there were the times that'd she'd purposely fainted to get out of P.E, and in those cases, Melissa'd gone over the top and pretended not to remember anything to get sent to the nurses office, but when she'd really fainted, she'd remembered everything previous. Melissa watched Gabriel, the girl who'd managed to get Jin to wake up. It almost looked like she was having a conversation with Rebecca, but not out loud. Rebecca had that freaky mind-power, didn't she? But Gabriel.. Why wasn't she talking out loud, it'd be easier, then everybody, including the people that didn't have freaky mind-powers, like herself, to hear everything and understand what in the world was going on. Melissa cocked her head slightly at Jin, then glanced at Gabriel and Rebecca, "Somebody explain, now," Melissa didn't ask, she demanded. Melissa didn't say "please", "thank you", or "sorry", with the exception of that one little slip up with Rebecca. Melissa eyed Rebecca and Gabriel through narrowed slits of her visible eye.