~Moonrise~SnowyTop~~Rosethorn Valley~Diamond Hills~*Part I* Rise of the Bear*

ATTENTION! ATTENTION! I AM CLOSING THIS RP, BUT WILL START THE SAME ONE RIGHT AWAY! YOU ALL WILL NOT HAVE TO REGISTER TO BE IN AGAIN I HAVE WROTE EVERYTHING DOWN! THIS TIME IT WILL BE IN THE MAGIC POWERS OR SOMETHING SECTION OF RPING! I WILL PM ALL OF YOU WHEN I AM READY!

Join Moonrise,SnowyTop, Rosethorn Valley, or Diamond Hills pack.

~~~RULES~~~
1. keep it rated PG
2. no more than 3 pups
3. no more than 3 mates per month
For the last time NO POWERS SOOO SORRY!
The Deal
The Great Bear has come out of hibernation; we all must join to defeat it

The Problem About The Deal
Moonrise and Diamond Hill aren't getting along too well; fights galore


If you want to join you must fill out the form:

Name( If you want to be alpha male or female of the pack; you must put "Star" after your name):
Description:
Personality:
Fears(optional):
Special Ability(No powers just like; Running fast, very quiet, etc):
Cubs(Give individual descriptions):



If you want to be alpha of SnowyTop, Rosethorn Valley, or Diamond Hills; I did not mention Moonrise because I am the alpha female but there is a spot for a male or my mate.

There is 2 medicine wolves for each pack

There is 1 deputy in each pack


Here is my form:
Name: SilverStar
Description: Silver all over; except underbelly, muzzle, and chest, scar on eye(but not blind)
personality: Patient, calm, but really tough
Fears: Badgers, thats how she got the eye scar
Special ability(only 1): Excellent fighting moves
Cubs: Wants some; but does not have a mate





Moonrise


Alpha Female~ SilverStar


Alpha Male~ ScallionStar


Brutes~


She Wolves~


Pups~

Medicine Wolves~


Betas~

SnowyTop



Alpha Female~


Alpha Male~


Brutes~


She Wolves~


Pups~

Medicine Wolves~


Betas~

Rosethorn Valley




Alpha Female~


Alpha Male~ EchoStar


Brutes~


She Wolves~


Pups~

Medicine Wolves~


Betas~


Diamond Hills




Alpha Female~ SmallStar


Alpha Male~


Brutes~


She Wolves~


Pups~

Medicine Wolves~


Betas~

I would add a list of members:

Alpha Female~


Alpha Male~


Brutes~


She Wolves~


Pups~

Medicine Wolves~


Betas~


And sense you have 4 packs, I would write it 4 times, and which pack it is, and your own forums. Look at other packs :)

And a Rules List

Name: Smallstar
Description:Shorter than average,black and white speckled wolf. yellow eyes. Flufffy tail.
Personality:Kind and intelligent. Does what can to avoid fights.
Fears(optional): Genrally losing a battle/losing wolves in his pack.
Special Ability: Despite his size, an amazing tracker.
Cubs:None. Searching for mate to rule with.

leader of
Diamond Hills.

Also, like Varjak said, you are missing a few things. And to attrack more members, try sprucing up the first page with different colors and sizes. Welcome to RPcentral!

Name( If you want to be alpha male or female of the pack; you must put "Star" after your name): Scallion *star*
Description: Pitch black brute, with glowing green eyes,
Personality: will unfold
Fears(optional): a fear of light.
Special Ability(No powers just like; Running fast, very quiet, etc): At night his eyes glow green if calm, they glow red if scared, or mad
Pups(Give individual descriptions): no
Other~ Is interested in Alpha Male of moonrise if that's OK.
Pack: Moonrise
Gender~ Male

((I'm gonna type Scallion in Green))

As I walked through the dark spots of the forest, I saw a patch of light. I gasped and made my way into camp, where a shady tree stood. "Anyone?"

[Moonrise, Diamondhills and Rosethorn valley are from an rp on WI did you rp there?]

NAme: Echo *star*
gender: brute
description: Pure white with blank, gray eyes. Red feathers in his tail and behind his ears
personality: quiet and easy going, yet fierce in battle. Blind on one eye, but NO one knows
fears: someone will find out he is blind in one eye.
ability: Flight
pups: no
alpha male of rosethorn?
pack: Rosethorn

What is a Beta and brute?

(Brute~ Male wolf)

(Beta~ When the lets say Alpha Male dies, the Beta will take his place, so you have a little line, I don't add betas, cause to me, if one dies, the alpha turns into a single alpha, and their pup turns alpha, and they/he/she turns into an Elder, look at Pond Dust, I have a line of Alphas. I don't like doing Betas. :))

((Do you add Star on every name? The star was because that is what you wanted me to add when I want to be alpha....))

(I'm gonna try your roleplay out. :) And welcome to RPC!)

Name: Risuro
Description: brick red brute with emerald green eyes.
Personality: kind of quiet and reserved, he tends to be shy. but once he knows you, he's really quite friendly and outgoing.
Fears: just what any wolf would have
Special Ability: (Just a suggestion: Maybe you could call the special ability a talent instead?) A great hunter.
Cubs: None yet.
(Suggestion again: You may want to put a part of the form for the pack and rank.)
Pack: Moonrise beta?

Name: Vishayla
Description: flame red she-wolf with amber eyes.
Personality: energetic and happy; loves to make friends. trusts easily, but if you break it, then she'll never forget.
Fears: just what any wolf would have
Special Ability: very fast
Cubs: not yet
Pack: Snowy Top alpha female? (If no one else is alpha.)

Name: Luna
Description: dark blue she-wolf with a white crescent moon on each cheek.
Personality: a little bit timid until she gets to know you; dreamy and quiet; fierce if necessary.
Fears: just what any wolf would have
Special Ability: a great hunter by night
Cubs: Not yet
Pack: Rosethorn Valley

Name: Cody
Description: chocolate brown brute with blue eyes.
Personality: Friendly and polite; cautious.
Fears: Just what any wolf would have.
Special Ability: good fighter
Cubs: not yet
Pack: Diamond Hills

[Am I accepted...]

No. Just the Alpha's have Star next to their name.

[I put Star...]

(Oh!)

"SilverStar! Look!" I looked towards a bear.

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We still need more wolves!