Jay
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 |  Subject: Star Wolves  Wed Sep 10, 2008 10:46 pm | |
| Book 1 : The Travel
Lizzie woke up from her sleep, she felt her brother, Caleb’s fur rising and falling.
“Lizzie, is that you?” Her mother whispered from the corner of the cave where her father and mother were sleeping. “Yes it is” Lizzie barked getting up out of the place she lay. She padded towards her mother. “Did you get cold last night?” Her mother asked concerned.
“I was fine” Lizzie barked letting a shiver run through her body.
“Good” the silvery wolf whispered licking Lizzie’s ear.
“Can I wake Caleb?” She asked hopefully. Her mother nodded.
“Thanks” Lizzie said scampering across the cold ground towards her brother. She prodded him with an outstretched paw. Caleb yawned and opened his eyes.
Lizzie tackled him, Caleb let out a sigh and bit into Lizzie’s tail lightly. “Caleb knock it off” Lizzie barked running out into the powdery snow. | |
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Jєt
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| | Subject: Re: Star Wolves Thu Sep 11, 2008 6:19 pm | |
| Maybe you could describe the setting a little more, so we get a better image in our mind.
Will you read my story? It's the one titled "Random...." | |
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| | Subject: Re: Star Wolves Thu Sep 11, 2008 6:48 pm | |
| I will XDD It is just the first Paragraph XP | |
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| | Subject: Re: Star Wolves Thu Sep 11, 2008 7:05 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Star Wolves Thu Sep 11, 2008 7:07 pm | |
| I read it, it is really good ^-^ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Star Wolves Thu Sep 11, 2008 7:10 pm | |
| Thanks, I'm basicly just making up stuff as I go along
G2G! | |
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