Sunclan! The clan of trust, loyaly, and thoughest

((I have fixed the spelling errors on your post, so people will read it easier. ;) Approved. ~Sparkle))

You walk tough the undergrowth in some unknown forest. Or that’s what you think... You can fell 5 pairs of eyes burning though you. Then a small but fierce she cat jumped on you and pins you down. The four others gather around. “Get off Yellowfang." One, a tom says. "Make me," The she cat, Yellowfang who is on you snapped. “Fine," the tom growls and pulls her off. “Get up!" a big she cat says walking you. You can tell that she is the leader because of her scent. You do what she orders. She glares into your eyes. Her pale icy blue eyes are cold. " Who are you and what are you doing on Sunclan territory?" She demands. What do you say... The choice is yours...


The Form:

Name:
Looks/Pic:
Personality:
Kits:
Personality:
Other:



Members:

Leader:
Riverstar~ she cat~ me~

Deputy:
Nightleaf
Apprentice is Finchpaw




Med. Cat:
Yellowfang ~ she cat~me

Med. Cat Apprentice:
?


Warriors:
Stonefur~tom~me
Feathertail~she cat~ me
Vinemist~ tom ~me


Apprentices:
Finchpaw


Queens:
??

Kits:
??


Elders:
??





Rules:
No chat speak.

Pleas make it more than one line!
Bad ex: i walked though the forst. (Too plain!)
Good ex: I walked though the ever so green forest. Some of the moss around the trees slicked up it like a snake. I stared into the valley below, pale blue eyes shiny.

Speak in third person, its easier for people to know who you are talking to.
Bad Ex:
I talked to her.
Good Ex:
Sun watched and talked to River.

I will give you 5 chances for the rules, if you get to 5, I may ask you to leave.

Type Sun Dancer if you read the rules.

Name:Nightleaf
Looks/Pic:All black tom...
Perosnlity:Unfold
Pups:?
Perosnlity:Another one!
Other:Deputy please!
I'm A Sun Dancer lol!

( lolz thanks for joing!)

Name: Finchpaw
Looks/Pic: Yellow with darker yellow-orange stripes and blue eyes.
Personality: KRAKaTOA! He's eager, full of energy, and yes, Finchpaw is a he. He's impatient, a strong fighter, but he isn't the stealthiest hunter, especially if he's excited.
Kits?: None!
Perosnlity: Uh...you just put that!
Other: Will be played in olive. Nanook, I know, Finchpaw is technically your name, but I loves it! Also, can you make sure he has a mentor that can be on as often as I am? Oooh, guess what? There's a sun dancer right outside my window! (jk)

( yea sorry!)

Riverstar walked over to him, and sat in front of Nightleaf." Whats with the hurry?" she asked. the grey she cat wraped her tail neatly around her two front paws, waiting for a answer.

"Nothing!" Nightleaf said as he looked up...

" Ok!"riverstar siad coldy. She walked back into her den and thought the little hole where a tree ( it broke though the top of the den) was growing from the middle of her den. ahh!" she sighed and rested in the sunlight patch.

(((Finchpaw could be Nightleaf's apprentice!))

((Fine by me. Horselover?))

((Cool!))

(sure!)

((Great!))

( Yep,c an u cheak your pms please!)

((I did I joined but, it is waiting to be accpeted by the admin :|

( ok thanks soo much!)

((Welcome!))

( *smilies*

Riverstar had a starnge dream...

Name:Goldenleaf
Looks/Pic:sleek golden she cat with light amber eyes
Perosnlity:sweet and caring
kitss:no
Other:no mate,played in
this color