| >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 10:27 am | |
| A lone cat sits on a sun-warmed rock in the middle of an empty clearing. Curiously, you pad up to him. "Who're you?" You ask. The cat, an old tom, looks up and chuckles. "You do not know who I am?" You shake your head. "I am Silverfeather, the medicine cat of all." Your eyes widened. Silverfeather was in many of your old nursery stories. "Come, and listen to the Story of Rosethornclan." He tells you, his eyes sparkling. You lay in a comfortable position, ready to listen.
"Many a moon ago, there was once a clan named Rosethorn.. It was the largest in the forest, and the most feared. Raggedstar was their leader, feirce and brave, willy and proud. Yet he was a good leader. His deputy, Rainstorm, was not. Rainstorm attempted to kill Raggedstar, but did not succeed. Raggedstar exhiled Rainstorm into the forest, where he lurks to this very day. But poor, poor Raggedstar. He could not cope with the events of the pass day. So he died...all...9....lives." Silverfeather shook his head in sadness. I. You think. Will bring Roseclan and Thornclan together one day. Rules: You know them. Follow them. Form- Name: gender: description: personality[optional]: clan: rank wanted: other: Roseclan: Leader- Reedstar Deputy-TBA Medicine cat-TBA Warriors: Rainheart Apprentices: Queens: Elders: :Thornclan: Leader-Inkstar Deputy-TBA Medicine cat-TBA Warriors: Ravenclaw Stormheart Apprentices: Queens: Elders: Reedstar's form: Name: Reedstar gender: tom description: Reedstar is a stocky tom with a dark red coat and white stripes. Reedstar's eyes are a dark amber, and one of his hindlegs is twisted personality[optional: Reedstar is a mentally quick tom. He reacts to everything around him, be it a butterfly, or a rogue attacking his camp. He can be rude at times, but he is a good leader and kind at most times clan: Rose rank wanted: Has it, leader other: none Inkstar's form: Name: Inkstar gender: she-cat description: Inkstar is as her name describes her. Her pelt is an inky black with stray white markings. Tawny colored fur climbs up each of her legs like fire, and twists around her shoulders and hips. Inkstar's tail was born with a short, almost bear-like tail. Her eyes are a dark, jade green personality[optional]: Will be played out Clan: Thorn Rank wanted: Has it, leader other: none
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 10:51 am | |
| Name: Stormheart gender: She-Cat description: A large gray/blue she-cat with white chest, paws and tail tip. Bright blue eyes with a hint of green to them. personality[optional]: Stormheart is very hyper, and gets in trouble often. She is a new warrior, still young and playful. Stormheart is tricky and clever, not to much common sense I might add. clan: Thorn rank wanted: Warrior other: Nope. | |
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Lan Fan Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2810 Join date : 2008-10-30 Age : 27 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 6:59 pm | |
| Name: Rainheart gender: Female description: A dark gray she-cat with large paws and bright blue eyes. Her fur is short and she has a long tail. personality[optional]: will unfold clan: RoseClan rank wanted: Deputy other: | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2398 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 27 Location : Go google it - if you can get past the eggplants.
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:01 pm | |
| Name: Ravenclaw gender: Male description:clan: ThornClan rank wanted: Warrior other: The "C" between the Clan name and "Clan" should be capitalized (e.g. ThunderClan, RiverClan, etc.) You spelled "fierce" wrong. You spelled "exiled" wrong. Why would a cat just walk up to a stranger and ask them who they were? | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:04 pm | |
| [I was typing fast]
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:05 pm | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:10 pm | |
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:12 pm | |
| (( Sure. Stormheart is not in the Clan yet. =) ))
Stormheart padded along, and pounced at a leaf, and pretended to wrestle it. She was looking for a Clan, but she didn't know where to go. | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:16 pm | |
| [kk]
Inkstar cursed under his breath as a mouse bounded out of his reach. The black tom's tail twitched in irritation as he continued his border patrol. | |
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:20 pm | |
| Stormheart finished her little game with the leaf, and pricked her ears. She smelled something, and heard something too. Another Clan cat, or a rogue? | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 8:05 am | |
| Inkstar growled, slowing to a brisk trot. He pricked his ears, and looked around. "Who's there?" | |
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:26 am | |
| Stormheart heard the voice just ahead, and pounced at a bush. She rolled right through, and leafs clung to her pelt. "Me..?" She said weakly. | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:34 am | |
| [Just replying, can't stay :( ]
Inkstar flinched as the she-cat appeared in front of him. "Why are you in Thornclan territory?" The inky black tom demanded. | |
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:36 am | |
| (( Aww..))
"I was looking for ThornClan.." Stormheart muttered in a 'duh' kind of tone. "I'm Stormheart, by the way, and who might you be?" Stormheart asked, getting up and shaking her pelt, trying to get the leafs off. | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 9:07 pm | |
| "Well, you're in luck. I am Inkstar, leader of Thornclan." He stated. | |
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 9:29 pm | |
| Stormheart dipped her head, trying to be as polite as possible. She looked ragged, leafs clinging to her pelt, her fur ruffled and messed up. | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 9:33 pm | |
| Inkstar chuckled. "Looks like you've had some adventures." HE remarked. | |
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 9:35 pm | |
| Stormheart chuckled along as well, though a little softer. "I guess so," Stormheart said, thinking of wrestling with a leaf, some adventure. "So, can I join your Clan, THornClan?" SHe asked. | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2398 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 27 Location : Go google it - if you can get past the eggplants.
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:39 pm | |
| Ravenclaw padded up to Inkstar. He had seen the cat and wanted to follow him for no apparent reason in case any jobs needed to be done. | |
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Lan Fan Trustworthy Member
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| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 11:07 pm | |
| Rainheart whirled around as she heard something. "What is it?"
Maybe it's just my overreacting again.
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Tue Mar 17, 2009 11:08 pm | |
| Stormheart turned when Ravenclaw showed up, and felt very self-consious. | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:57 pm | |
| Inkstar's ears twitched as the other cat approached. "Hello." He murmured, staying calm.
Reedstar yawned and padded out of her den; only to look at an empty clan camp. The she-cat sighed, and trudged outinto the forest. | |
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Mad MOAI Trustworthy Member
Posts : 2398 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 27 Location : Go google it - if you can get past the eggplants.
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:44 pm | |
| ((What, we're in the same Clan and we don't know each other?))
Ravenclaw flicked his tail to signal that he was just keeping watch. | |
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Renna Longshadow Trustworthy Member
Posts : 3381 Join date : 2008-08-25 Location : The Village Hidden in the Leaves
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:15 pm | |
| [I thought Ravenclaw hadn't joined yet?] [nvm]
Inkstar nodded in Ravenclaw's direction. "Meet your new clanmate, Ravenclaw. Her name is Stormheart." He mewed. | |
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kieran c: They're over 9000!
Posts : 13885 Join date : 2008-08-28 Age : 25 Location : Washington State
| Subject: Re: >Roseclan and Thornclan< Part 1: Life time enemies Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:35 pm | |
| Stormheart froze up, and turned stiffly to Ravenclaw. "H-hi." SHe said weakly, smiling weakly as well. | |
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