((Just to let you know, RPs aren't the same as writing. It's where other people take part, too; try looking around at some other role-plays around the site to get an idea.
So it's clear what's going on, you should probably put a prologue-type thing -- apparently, that's what you have up there -- but a joining form, however simple, is often essential. It can be anything from just:
Name:
Gender:
Appearance:
To also listing personality, a history of your character, and sometimes other things depending on the plot. Before you just jump in, it's good to know what you're doing -- you should look around at some other topics and see how RPs are built, and probably also read some topics in the Guides section. Right now, it's unclear what is exactly going on in the RP, and what is expected of those who join you.))