Black Moore part 1 (read me please!)

This is a role play about three packs Sunfire pack, Runningbrook pack,and Foxpelt pack Dark wolves, have killed wolves and pups have gone missing wil,l you please join? Pretty please

I might join... but first of all (in fact, the only thing that really bothers me) you should improve the grammar (you can use the edit button in the top right corner). I don't really see any punctuation, which makes it extremely hard to read. I see a few periods, but there are still some places where there should be a break. If you type sentences like this, it will be a lot easier to understand, and a huge deal more inviting! The grammar is the only thing that's keeping me from joining... and as I said, that's really easy to improve.

And don't forget to use punctuation on your posts, too!

Maybe you should do it like this.:

You can use that ^ as an example (if you really want to, you can copy and paste it into your topic).

(thanks lan Fan I will can i give you credit too?Is it any better?)

Yes, much better! You can give me credit or not, whichever you like. (Don't forget to use punctuation in your in-character posts, too! Your posts in the African Wild Dogs RP could still use some work, but they are definitely on the better side compared to when you first started out.)

I think I'll join... once I come up with a character.

(yay! Lan your awsome! you such a good help)