Firegal001
Posts : 2 Join date : 2010-09-26
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| Subject: Re: Forgotten Angels Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:12 am | |
| Hey Firegal. As much as the plot sounds interesting, there are a few things that I think might help improve it. First off, here at RPC we usually create a "form" which people fill out so it's easier to picture the character they play. Secondly, it helps if you give a bit more of an elaborate backstory, rather than just two sentences. If you aren't getting a clear picture, try looking at some of these famous (or soon to be) RPs. Valia By RebeccaBloody Sunsets By BranchThunderclan By Alley | |
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