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PostSubject: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:59 pm

The sequel to Whoopsidaisy. I'll trick it out once I can get back on the computer, but I have roughly three minutes, so I can only post the preface. It's mainly just for laughs to set the pace of the story. XD


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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:50 pm

Okay, I fixed it. XD After some technical difficulties, I have the prologue up.

I was actually going to put the rules on a picture on MS Paint to save text, but I messed it up and...yeah. So, a mega-short prologue to get the ball rolling.

I thought it would be kind of ironic to post something with a bunch of rules today. XD
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:54 pm

MOHR. Now. I demand it.

Yes, if you put a raccoon on my bed, you might find your bed decked out in clown gear. xD
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:19 pm

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

THE CLOWNS MUST BE DESTROYED!
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:59 pm

Oh nice. xD
YOU LEAVE MEH VIDEO ALONE.

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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Sun Jul 04, 2010 5:01 pm

You forced my hand. You can't just take away my right to have a swivel chair! -points to username-
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:52 pm

Lol

Rule 51: You do not talk about the agency.
Rule 52: You do NOT talk about the agency.

Fight Club reference ova here!
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:01 pm

YES. I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING I FORGOT.
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Mon Jul 05, 2010 12:19 am

BUTCHOONAMEDURFERRETBASILISNTTHATAREFERENCE.
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Mon Jul 05, 2010 3:29 am

.. You put whip cream in my hand and tickled my nose..
YOU'RE DEAD, PUNK. D:<
UNLESS.. You write more story? =o

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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:42 am

@ Otto- D8 HOW DID I FORGET, MAN?! HOWWWWW?!





...-hides can of shaving cream and featherduster- I...I did nothing of the sort, Branch.





And I don't know. All I have down is the preface right now. XD I'm not even sure how the story is going to go. I was just like, "You know what? Sequel time." XD
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:05 pm

Quote :
24. I am not an assassin known as Lilliana, no matter what story it was you read online.
32. You cannot smell fear.
33. Just because you are good at stealing doesn't mean you should.
34. I want my iPod back.
35. Jay appreciates the thought, but please never catch a raccoon and leave it on his bed as a gift again.

OHGOSH.
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You literally had my dying of laughter while I was reading that. 'I am not an assassin known as Lilliana, no matter what story it was you read online'. xDD I'm a party pooper, and the line about the 'Proper' and British joke. xDD Please, write more.
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:14 am

ALSO, did the bullet just drill a hole in my bone, Dr. MedicalandGunGenius sir? Because I'm no doctor, but I'm *pretty* sure that one does not heal WOUNDS by encasing them in a CAST, but by BANDAGING or STITCHING them? *coughyoufailcough*
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:46 am

Yes. It shattered your radius, smart man. Which, it may surprise you, a gun can actually do. WOW! The mustachio wasn't exactly aiming well, but he did hit your bone. It resulted in a broken bone, which needed a cast. You went through surgery in which the doctors removed the bullet from your arm, where it had buried itself in your muscle tissue behind your bone. They stitched the bullet hole up and you have to have your cast removed every week or so to replace the bandaging in the wound itself. Interestingly enough, the bullet Mustachio had loaded into the pistol was a soft-point, which is why it was crucial to get you into surgery asap.

To answer your question.

Oh, and his gun was a Smith & Wesson Model 1026.
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Tue Jul 06, 2010 11:20 am

Did you actually think about that while you were writing the story? o-o
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Tue Jul 06, 2010 11:24 am

XD Maybe. I actually did realize halfway through that you wouldn't need a cast for a bullet hole, so I decided it would've hit your bone too, and, while I'm at it, why not give your injury a bit more depth, eh?
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PostSubject: Chapter 2   Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:57 pm

Chapter 2 is heah! We find out Subs's real (fictional) name! Also, why is it that an agency hires kids who deliberately shirk their duties to get food? XD That is another question for another time! PLUS, the quotes still start off every chapter, but I don't list who said them. See if you can figure it out, man! :D

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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:51 pm

OH EPICSWEETNESS OF DOOM.
MORE.

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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:20 pm

Mycroft? Seriously? You couldn't think of anything, so you named me MYCROFT?

XD jk It's cool.
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Wed Jul 07, 2010 7:47 pm

WAS THE COMIC AN NCIS REFERENCE?
JIMMY, TALKING TO DEAD PEOPLE, BACON. (Well, maybe not the bacon... xD)
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:05 pm

Hm. I don't watch NCIS much simply because it sounds like another "CSI" show going on, but I don't know. How did it go in NCIS?
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:07 pm

Do baconaters exist? -shot- hah hah irony with the shooting and the getting shot and-shotshot-
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:08 pm

Okay, so the Medical Examiner's name is Ducky (Donald Mallard - Real name), and his assistant is named Jimmy. Ducky always talks to the bodies on his table for something to do while he's checking them out, and tells them stories of when he was a kid that pertains to their murders. Jimmy always makes wise-cracks.
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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:09 pm

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PostSubject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9]   Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:10 pm

f,.ndxz,.v,ncm.zxjleawopuprewaop. MOAR plz. What is taking so long D:
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